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this right herr???

this is on fiya... love how the chorus hits and it explodes.. this could be a hit

GrantBowtie responds:

Thanks! :D

where you in north?

reminds me of some flint music,, some shoestring or bootleg

nice guys

both was flowin but if i had to be a judge wyze got it... how i get on this action!!! i wanna battle someone lolz get at me

lovin the flow

seems like it came easy right? when you flowin about somethin so real.. the flow was dope as shit. I'm goin thru same shit.
i think this could be a good ass song.. towards the end you could redo it around
1:40 send me a verse see if you like the flow.
this is just somethin that alot of people can relate to.

wow

5/5 10/10 if this gets in to the right hands than damn! amazing

lovin transition

love the transition at 35 sec. hot shit

sup!

nice shit i like the transition at 1:13.
im not a house kinda dude but i appreciate it ya dig?
seems like some parts it needs to have more instros playing at one time.
you know? make me wanna get up and start dancin!
i like it good job

not bad

you got a problem i got.. you need a pop filter.

flow was kinda off a little in some parts

lryics was good

i really like how you did your hypes

overall i see some talent keep doin you

BummerCityTown responds:

Thanks twickz. I'm looking for constructive criticism, so i appreciate that. I'll look into a pop filter and tighten up my flow. I have about 6 songs written that need to be recorded so far for this tape. Thanks again :)

god damn

this shit is fire. perfectly placed everything... what do i hear when i hear this beat????

gettin some pussy ahahah no lie

yeah

Remember what i said about simple.. sometimes the best beat is "dumbed down" amazing instro.... but where is the verse....this is just one amazing chorus.... you da shit ...just some constructive crit from ya boi

the first part starts off with the bridge and then chorus comes in then the beat needs to drop it. simple it down for a verse to fit in then come back wit that chorus n i swear i'll make this a hit

lookin for collabs!!!

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