this right herr???
this is on fiya... love how the chorus hits and it explodes.. this could be a hit
where you in north?
reminds me of some flint music,, some shoestring or bootleg
both was flowin but if i had to be a judge wyze got it... how i get on this action!!! i wanna battle someone lolz get at me
lovin the flow
seems like it came easy right? when you flowin about somethin so real.. the flow was dope as shit. I'm goin thru same shit.
i think this could be a good ass song.. towards the end you could redo it around
1:40 send me a verse see if you like the flow.
this is just somethin that alot of people can relate to.
5/5 10/10 if this gets in to the right hands than damn! amazing
beat is sick! this shit goes hard.. if you dont finish it then what are you doin wit ya life ahahha nice track
love the transition at 35 sec. hot shit
nice shit i like the transition at 1:13.
im not a house kinda dude but i appreciate it ya dig?
seems like some parts it needs to have more instros playing at one time.
you know? make me wanna get up and start dancin!
i like it good job
you got a problem i got.. you need a pop filter.
flow was kinda off a little in some parts
lryics was good
i really like how you did your hypes
overall i see some talent keep doin you
Thanks twickz. I'm looking for constructive criticism, so i appreciate that. I'll look into a pop filter and tighten up my flow. I have about 6 songs written that need to be recorded so far for this tape. Thanks again :)
this shit is fire. perfectly placed everything... what do i hear when i hear this beat????
gettin some pussy ahahah no lie
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